this week's story: "Deep Cover" By Kijikun

[kijikun.livejournal.com]

I fretted for a while over which story to choice for this. In the end I choice the one I feel is my weakest story, and the one I'm the least happy over.

Deep Cover, my first Due South fic. A cliché fic at that. RayK and Fraser undercover at a gay sex club. Like that hasn't been done before.

If any of you can make sense of the title, let me know because I haven't a clue what I was thinking.

What hurts this story the most I think is the voices. Fraser feels too formal to me now. I'm also not sure the plot works, even though its light-years from what it was before my betas looked at it.

Take your best crack and let me know what you think.

Deep Cover, NC-17 RayK/Fraser

The mod for this week is sprat. She can be reached at sprat75 {at} gmail {dot} com.

Comments

[sprat.livejournal.com]

Hmmm. I'll ask if anyone else missed the original post in the reminder I'm about to put up. Maybe we ought to ask people to post-date their entries anyway, just to be safe.

Thanks for going back to check. :)

[kijikun.livejournal.com]

Maybe have us not submit our posts until the day its supposed to go live would work also.