this week's story: "Deep Cover" By Kijikun

[kijikun.livejournal.com]

I fretted for a while over which story to choice for this. In the end I choice the one I feel is my weakest story, and the one I'm the least happy over.

Deep Cover, my first Due South fic. A cliché fic at that. RayK and Fraser undercover at a gay sex club. Like that hasn't been done before.

If any of you can make sense of the title, let me know because I haven't a clue what I was thinking.

What hurts this story the most I think is the voices. Fraser feels too formal to me now. I'm also not sure the plot works, even though its light-years from what it was before my betas looked at it.

Take your best crack and let me know what you think.

Deep Cover, NC-17 RayK/Fraser

The mod for this week is sprat. She can be reached at sprat75 {at} gmail {dot} com.

Comments

[sprat.livejournal.com]

Oh dear. I was worried that might be an issue, since we've asked people to make their posts prior to the date we plan to release them. But then this post showed up on my flist right after I approved it, so I assumed all was well.

I'll make a post now, linking to this one, so we can be sure everyone sees it. Sorry about the mix-up, kijikun! And thanks, zebra363, for pointing this out!

[zebra363.livejournal.com]

Actually, I just scrolled back to the 17th and this post is there. Maybe I just missed it?

[sprat.livejournal.com]

Hmmm. I'll ask if anyone else missed the original post in the reminder I'm about to put up. Maybe we ought to ask people to post-date their entries anyway, just to be safe.

Thanks for going back to check. :)

[kijikun.livejournal.com]

Maybe have us not submit our posts until the day its supposed to go live would work also.