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kijikun.livejournal.comI fretted for a while over which story to choice for this. In the end I choice the one I feel is my weakest story, and the one I'm the least happy over.
Deep Cover, my first Due South fic. A cliché fic at that. RayK and Fraser undercover at a gay sex club. Like that hasn't been done before.
If any of you can make sense of the title, let me know because I haven't a clue what I was thinking.
What hurts this story the most I think is the voices. Fraser feels too formal to me now. I'm also not sure the plot works, even though its light-years from what it was before my betas looked at it.
Take your best crack and let me know what you think.
Deep Cover, NC-17 RayK/Fraser
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Deep Cover, my first Due South fic. A cliché fic at that. RayK and Fraser undercover at a gay sex club. Like that hasn't been done before.
If any of you can make sense of the title, let me know because I haven't a clue what I was thinking.
What hurts this story the most I think is the voices. Fraser feels too formal to me now. I'm also not sure the plot works, even though its light-years from what it was before my betas looked at it.
Take your best crack and let me know what you think.
Deep Cover, NC-17 RayK/Fraser
The mod for this week is
sprat. She can be reached at sprat75 {at} gmail {dot} com.
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