This is soooooooooooooooo fantastic. I find Fraser so. Very. Hard. Which is why he's barely appeared in my fic (that and my love for Ray/Ray is unquantifiable). I am definitely going to be using this as a guide for if/when he next wants to be written.

I'm glad you mentioned the run-on sentences because that's one of the things I love most about him, the way he punctuates his little tangents almost as if to remind himself not to forget to get back to the original topic. Plus the asides are often a lovely peek into his personality. *hearts*

Thank you so much.